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Film Review from Civil War Memories: 
"The movie does a very good job of addressing the discrimination faced by the 54th Massachusetts as well as their heroic performance at Battery Wagner in July 1863. One of the themes that the movie captures is the slow progress that Col. Robert G. Shaw experienced in learning to more closely empathize with his men as well as the gradual changes that took place among white Union soldiers as they questioned their own racial outlook in response to the battlefield prowess of black regiments like the 54th... As for problems, well, they abound throughout the movie such as the profile of the regiment, which is presented primarily as a unit of fugitive slaves. Most of the men were free blacks from Massachusetts. Other problems include the time frame for the raising and training of the regiment which began in 1863 rather than 1862 as well as the failure to acknowledge Shaw’s marriage at any point in the movie." 
My Paraphrase: 

Glory correctly portrayed the brave action the men of the 54th Massachusetts took in a Civil Car battle in 1863, despite the injustice thrust upon them. It shows the progress of compassion and understanding the white men of the platoon and Shaw had towards their men as their racists views changed. The movie depicted the men as a group of runaway slaves when in reality they were African American men from the North. The movie is not chronologically correct the upbringing and discipline of the soldiers wasn't until 1863 rather than 1862. The movie also fails to mention Shaw having a wife. 



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